The character has an interesting pose, but I don't think the proportions are quite right. His neck seems to be too long and the cross on his chest seems to be lying awkwardly on his chest. But I would like see more character developments from you.
The neck may seem too long because he is not meant to be realistically proportioned. He is slightly exaggerated, but I can see where you might get that. This is also based off of someone else's character design, not my own. I agree the cross looks a bit odd.